Wide awake, waiting!
Wide awake, waitingFor the hours to go by,
Every minute, every hour
Seems to drag by...
Waiting.. not knowing
what i am waiting for.
The impregnable silence
Tearing at me.
Wishing for pain,
Wishing for joy,
To break the monotony
To tear apart the darkness..
Wide awake, waiting
For the hours to go by,
Every minute, every hour
Seems to drag by...
Wish for a hand
To shake me awake.
Stretching my hands
From below the current.
I'm slipping by,
I'm sucked in,
A dark never ending tunnel
No light, no life...
Wide awake, waiting,
For the hours to go by,
Every minute, every hour
Seems to drag by...
7 Candles:
sudeep once said, waiting is the most cruel of all pains..i believe him..
wonderful write sis! :)
thanks rina :)
Yes Viji! it really happens. We wait for an hour , a day even a year...Good thoughts...Viji
Nice one Viji.. But why such a depressing poem? :(
Waiting demands trust and patience.
thanks Vidya :)
nami smiles to you :)will write a humorous cheerful one for you...
exactly Ajey... waiting makes life exciting.. its a painful pleasure... one need to experience "waiting" to feel this.
pain of waiting.. what can i say, its a really well written piece..
but it sounds sad dear
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