Thursday, July 16, 2009 Humour , My Poems , Two liners 6 Comments
I can explain Honey
it was a new moon day
no street lamps
and I thought it was you.
Some say he’s half man half fish, others say he’s more of a seventy/thirty split. Either way he’s a fishy bastard. Google
Excellent,...simply superb....!!!and am happy to comment on this(being the first person to comment ur short poem)U r back to the form!!!!!!Cheers!!!
Glad to see your comment buddy... thanks for dropping in...u are the judge :)
Haha! Nicely done! I like a touch of comedy in poems! Keep writing!!!
thanks AJ :)
hahaha.. but it was in the morning :)dont they say that dogs can see in the dark!>?
Cats can see well in the dark...but dogs? am not so sure... May be a shade better than humans... Oh! no! don't you dare to think what I think you are thinking!!
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Excellent,...simply superb....!!!and am happy to comment on this(being the first person to comment ur short poem)
U r back to the form!!!!!!
Cheers!!!
Glad to see your comment buddy... thanks for dropping in...u are the judge :)
Haha! Nicely done! I like a touch of comedy in poems! Keep writing!!!
thanks AJ :)
hahaha.. but it was in the morning :)
dont they say that dogs can see in the dark!>?
Cats can see well in the dark...but dogs? am not so sure... May be a shade better than humans... Oh! no! don't you dare to think what I think you are thinking!!
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